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Elf Girl

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So... i decided to experiment and I was feeling like I needed to do art unrelated to gaia rofl... So yeah. This is it.

I could totally use critique~ I want to be better so that it'll be easier rofl

Anyway.. hope you enjoy.
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ยฉ 2009 - 2024 UsagiKami
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Style: I love it, so soft and lovely. But the hair and eyes contrast too harshly with the soft skin and clothes.

Anatomy: You've nearly got it! Just some smaller things. For example, the rib cage does not extend to far out unless one is holding their breath. Breasts, no matter what, are always the same size, too. The eyes are the right size, just too far apart. Shoulders and arms are wider, too, unless one is emaciated. The her face and torso would be thinner and bonier, and her hair would be scraggly. The nose is almost perfect! Just a little perspective issue. It, unless it's very flat, is longer and covers more of the fave in a 3/4 view. The ears are more detailed. Also, the hair would go around them, not through them.

Perspective: Nearly got it! See the nose mark above. Also, it looks like she has an ear on the back of her head. I suggest either making the front one look flatter against the head or the back seen coming from the left of her. (My left, her right)

Color: Loving it! The background is stunningly beautiful, and provides perfect contrast. The only thing that gets me is the lighter spots on it.

Shading: the only thing is the beads on her clothes. They also cast shadows. Her hair, too, has shadows in the part.

Best parts: I love the blurred look of the skin. and the contrast between her and the background.

All in all, a beautiful job with lovely colors and style.